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Ms. G
Super April 2011

Need opinion - Ceremony relocation announcment

Ms. G, on March 10, 2011 at 10:47 PM Posted in Etiquette and Advice 0 8

How doe this sound please

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT

Ceremony Relocated

The wedding ceremony of Miguel and Naila

has been relocated to the reception site.

Verdi’s of Westbury

680 Old Country Road

Westbury, New York

at 10:30 in the morning

Saturday, April 30th 2011

We apologize for any inconvenience.

Please call for more info

8 Comments

Latest activity by Ms. G, on March 15, 2011 at 4:20 PM
  • Ms. G
    Super April 2011
    Ms. G ·
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    I would like if someone would just give it a quick read...pls

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  • Barbara
    Expert August 2011
    Barbara ·
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    Ms. G i think it is fine, however you may want to edit the post and remove your phone #

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  • Kimberly
    VIP August 2011
    Kimberly ·
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    Are you mailing these separately? I feel like it comes across like you're yelling at your guests. How about:

    Please be advised that the ceremony location has been changed.

    Please join us at Verdi's of Westbury promptly at ten thirty in the morning to witness as we exchange marriage vows (or something along those lines…)

    Reception immediately following the ceremony.

    address…

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  • Ms. G
    Super April 2011
    Ms. G ·
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    Oh snap!! thanks Barbara it was late ....though I don't think anyone cares....

    @ Kimberly....LOL - I never even saw it that way...thanks Smiley smile

    Yes these will be mailed separately.

    I just like to run these things by you guys first

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  • FMS, the barefoot wife!
    Master August 2010
    FMS, the barefoot wife! ·
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    Just to be safe, I would post a sign or leave that info at the previous ceremony site, just incase somone ignores that.

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  • Ms. G
    Super April 2011
    Ms. G ·
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    Oh....YES FMS....you are correct, I didn't even think about that....Thank you so much

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  • Mrs Lilow
    VIP June 2011
    Mrs Lilow ·
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    I think instead of "ceremony relocated", maybe "new ceremony location" flows better? or "Our ceremony location has changed!". The rest sounds great. I would send in an e-mail/facebook message too just to make sure everyone sees it.

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  • Ms. G
    Super April 2011
    Ms. G ·
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    Thanks Ms. L.....I've been away for some days now....sorry i didn't see youe comment.

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