Spanish readers, care read my thank you speech for reception?

Tambien queremos dar gracias a nuestros amigos que salieron en nuestra boda. David, Carlos, Luis, y Marco. Y mis damas, Esperanza, Stephanie and Ivonne, I love you sisters! Mi dama de honor vero, thanks for being the best maid honor, thanks for all your help til this day and helping me not become a bridezilla.

Agradecimientos especiales para los que nos ayudaron con algunos detalles de la boda, a nuestros padres, Tio Antonio y tia Aracely, Fabian, Tia hortencia, Tia Ale, Maria Eugenia, Vero, y David. Se les agradece de todo Corazon.

Por ultimo, gracias a dios por darme este dia, y poder celebrar nuestro amor en compania de mis hijos Isaiah & Andrew y con todos ustedes.

Esperamos que se la sigan pasando bien!

Gracias.

What do ya'll think?

It sounds nice I'm not fluent in Spanish but I think I understood most of what you were saying. I like that it's still nice and short as well. Why are there some sentences in English?

I always talk to my MOH in English lol and my sisters and I refer to each other as "sisters", so I prefer to say that in English.

I think it's pretty great, la unica differencia para mi fuera darle gracias a Dios antes de todos, especialmente si te vas a casar por la Iglesia.

Its short and sweet, can't really say if you're leaving anyone out I'm not religious, so not sure if thanking god before everything is really that important. Maybe have your groom be a part of the thanks? i see thanking the maid of honor specifically, but not any best man?

Thanks Future Mrs., buena idea, si me voy a casar por la iglesia

Duales, My FH plans to give his own speach, but in English. I'm sure he will thank his bestman specifically. His best man is mentioned in my speach though.

Just one other comment to keep in mind: Not all of your guests will necessarily know spanish (or do they?) so if there are multiple speeches being done in a language that not everyone understands it would be the best to keep them as short as possible, or maybe even just do them in English.

I attended a wedding and speeches went on for about an hour by many different people and most of them were in a language that I didn't understand (and nor did the rest of my table). It was a little painful, but we did our best to fake laugh at "appropriate times" (it became a joke).

We are doing something similar Mayra, I will be giving the thank you speech in spanish and FH will be giving it in English.

LadyMonk, Every single person in attendance speaks Spanish. Most of them speak English as well. My FH is only doing it in English b/c that's what he's comfortable with.