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Mrs. Carmen
Master September 2010

Can I ask a flavor?

Mrs. Carmen, on August 14, 2010 at 7:53 PM Posted in Planning 0 27

Does anyone wanna be super awesome and let me email them my ceremony? I wrote it myself (sorta. Some parts I wrote and some parts are from things I've read.) and let me know how it sounds? I'm getting ready to print the last page of my programs, so I need to make sure my ceremony is 100% awesome before I commit to printing 100 outlines of it. I need to know if it's too long or too short or too stupid in general. My biggest qualm with it at the moment is that there are two readings, and I want them to be followed with an explanation of each, but I'm not sure what to say. Maybe I'll make another thread about that and see what ya'll have to say about each one. Also, I want it to last right around a half hour, but I'm not sure if it will or not cause it only takes me like three minutes to read it all in my head.

Anyway, yeah...will someone read this please? TIA!

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Latest activity by Anren, on August 15, 2010 at 12:24 PM
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    VIP September 2011
    ~Jeff's Angel~ ·
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    Sure - you can e-mail it me if you want

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  • Devin
    Devoted April 2011
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    You can send it to me if you'd like. i may not be of much help, but i can try. as for the time, i'm sure you will be fine since it takes time in between the readings and all of that. plus, you have probably read it a good bit and know it better than whoever will be reading it does

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  • Officially His Mrs P.
    Master October 2010
    Officially His Mrs P. ·
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    You can send it my way

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    Sent out pm's so I can get your emails. Thanks so much ladies.

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  • Kristen
    Expert September 2010
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    Carmen I'd be happy to read too! I wrote ours, and had some of the same concerns you have.

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    Sent ya a pm. =0)

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    Got your reply, Corinne. Thanks so much!!!

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    VIP September 2011
    ~Jeff's Angel~ ·
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    You are very welcome, thank you for letting me read it Smiley smile

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  • Jass
    Master September 2012
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    You can send it to me too...will pm you!

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  • Jass
    Master September 2012
    Jass ·
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    Umm I can't pm you, since your page is restricted. Boo!

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    Lol. I was waiting for that. I'll pm you.

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    ...or not.

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    *****************@*****.***

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    Thanks, Devin! Got your reply. =0)

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  • MelKel
    Master May 2010
    MelKel ·
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    Carmen, if you are still looking for feedback you can send it to me

    ******@*****.***

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  • Mrs. Carmen
    Master September 2010
    Mrs. Carmen ·
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    Thanks. I just emailed it to you.

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  • Devin
    Devoted April 2011
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    Anytime, girl!

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  • Mrs. Pratt
    Dedicated October 2010
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    Aure I would love to help any time possible I am here if you need me to listen and I will give you my advice

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  • FMW ~ BatLlama
    Master May 2011
    FMW ~ BatLlama ·
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    Being the smart@ss that I am, I'm just going to say...



    chocolate>/b>

    =0)

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  • The Awesome Thief
    Master February 2010
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    I have to agree with FMW.....but I'd like to say orange. Lol

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