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Daniella
VIP October 2017

Proofreading Invitations

Daniella, on January 26, 2017 at 1:21 PM

Posted in Planning 27

I was hoping you all could look over my invitations and make sure they look okay! Is there anything you would change? I just want to make sure before I order them all. Thanks so much in advance! I'm on mobile so I'll add the rsvp card in the comments.

I was hoping you all could look over my invitations and make sure they look okay! Is there anything you would change? I just want to make sure before I order them all. Thanks so much in advance! I'm on mobile so I'll add the rsvp card in the comments.


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  • Samantha
    VIP June 2017
    Samantha ·
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    I guess we worship at the zoo! Lol We used honor on our invites. Not in a church and not religious. No one I showed the invites to when proofing them even knew that was a thing so I would not be too worried about using it even if it's not religious Smiley smile

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  • Jacky
    Master June 2017
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    Yes, the opening paragraph should only be capitalized at the beginning. You should also put your last names there, too. The date and time seems a little unorganized. October 20 and 2o17 should be together. If 4:30 is to be numeric, at least put "at 4:30 PM" with a space between 4:30 and PM. At the bottom under the address, you should have something along the lines of "Reception to follow."

    From a designer viewpoint, you should try using a scripted font for your names and venue title. Also, IMO letters on an invite look better when they are capitalized. It's a very nice invitation, though!

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  • CJ
    VIP May 2018
    CJ ·
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    Others have covered all my suggestions.

    On thing to add: I would personally write the date as "September 20, 2017" on the RSVP card.

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  • Daniella
    VIP October 2017
    Daniella ·
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    Okay, invitation version 2.0

    I'm unsure about writing out the time, as the date isn't written out (with the layout I can't spell it out). Thoughts?


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  • Bee
    Master April 2017
    Bee ·
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    Not sure what service you're using but can you edit the day/time to the format like this on mine? I think zazzle initially gave me the layout the way yours did and I didn't like the way it looked with my date.


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  • Daniella
    VIP October 2017
    Daniella ·
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    I tried to edit the date a bunch of different ways and no luck on writing it out. I think its alright the way it is though, our wedding will be fairly relaxed.

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  • Daniella
    VIP October 2017
    Daniella ·
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    I didn't even think of emailing, good idea! Also I'm surprised there's all these traditions that I never new about that are pretty interesting!

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