Proofreading Invitations

I guess we worship at the zoo! Lol We used honor on our invites. Not in a church and not religious. No one I showed the invites to when proofing them even knew that was a thing so I would not be too worried about using it even if it's not religious

Yes, the opening paragraph should only be capitalized at the beginning. You should also put your last names there, too. The date and time seems a little unorganized. October 20 and 2o17 should be together. If 4:30 is to be numeric, at least put "at 4:30 PM" with a space between 4:30 and PM. At the bottom under the address, you should have something along the lines of "Reception to follow."

From a designer viewpoint, you should try using a scripted font for your names and venue title. Also, IMO letters on an invite look better when they are capitalized. It's a very nice invitation, though!

Others have covered all my suggestions.

On thing to add: I would personally write the date as "September 20, 2017" on the RSVP card.

Okay, invitation version 2.0

I'm unsure about writing out the time, as the date isn't written out (with the layout I can't spell it out). Thoughts?

Not sure what service you're using but can you edit the day/time to the format like this on mine? I think zazzle initially gave me the layout the way yours did and I didn't like the way it looked with my date.

I tried to edit the date a bunch of different ways and no luck on writing it out. I think its alright the way it is though, our wedding will be fairly relaxed.

I didn't even think of emailing, good idea! Also I'm surprised there's all these traditions that I never new about that are pretty interesting!