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Help me create a final draft of my moh speech?

Heather, on September 15, 2022 at 12:44 PM Posted in Etiquette and Advice 0 5

Hello! I am giving a MOH speech for a friend of mine next week. Me and the bride were fairly close for a few years in high school, but have grown apart and haven't really spoken since then. To my surprise, she asked me to be her MOH as she was struggling to find bridesmaids. Of course I said yes, but I am definitely struggling to write something as heartfelt as many that I am reading.

Does this sound like a decent, quick speech to get me through or do I need to scrap and restart?

ALL advice and tips are so, so appreciated! I am struggling and extremely nervous to do this!

Im attaching photos below, names crossed out because they are very unique!


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5 Comments

Latest activity by Imani, on September 16, 2022 at 12:36 AM
  • Rachel
    Dedicated October 2023
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    I think it's perfect!!
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  • Bailey
    Expert October 2023
    Bailey ·
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    Oh, this is so perfect. Don't change a dang thing!

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  • Erin
    Super May 2022
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    This is perfect! If I were her, I’d be so touched 🥰
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  • Shannon
    Super July 2022
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    While I like your thoughts, I think this is a bit long. Perhaps it can be shortened. Remember that most people have short attention spans.
    My father made a toast at our wedding and it was from the heart, not reading from a paper or phone and cleverly worded.

    When you are delivering a toast, the most important things to keep in mind are: Keep it short and to the point, make eye contact, make personal references and add some humor.
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  • Imani
    Master July 2022
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    🥹 beautifully written! Absolutely love it!!
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