Does this make sense for the text of the wedding invitation, or does something need to be revised? This is the intended layout of the lines (but will be centered on the invitation). Does the capitalization make sense? What about spelling out the date?
Please join us in joyous celebration as
Jennifer [Last name]
and
Frederick [Last name]
exchange wedding vows on
Saturday, the first of October
Two thousand eleven
at half past three o'clock in the afternoon
Hacienda de las Flores
2100 Donald Drive
Moraga, California
Dinner reception to follow