Vows

Ok so I'm an extremely anxious person and my FH really wanted to write our own vows. It's one of the maybe two things he's asked for. So here we are 9 days away and I'm writing my vows. This is what I have so far. Let me know what you think.

Today as I become your wife I vow to shelter you from your own insecurities and lift you up to the amazing person I see. I vow to pause and take a breath. Remembering that we are two different people, merging together two different lives. I will breath and breath and breath again as I repeat myself for you. I vow to always be truthful with you so that you may know me as well as I know myself. Though I'm sure you will come to know me better. I vow to laugh with you at not only the silly songs we make up for one another but at the mistakes I'm sure we will make over the years. I vow to love not only the person you are today but the man you will become. I will devote myself to you through the pressures of our present and the uncertainties of our future. We will grow side by side together and as I give you my hand to hold, I give you my life and my love to keep.