My fiancee and I have our invites prepped but we are getting some mixed opinions on the rough draft from our proofers since we designed them. We have been living together for 3 years and pretty much have everything and then some for household. We have a section labeled 'Gifts' and under that it reads "Out life together has already begun; we have almost everything under the sun. If you should wish to buy us a gift, a little extra money would give us a ship. However please do not feel obligated as most importantly we request you share our magical day as our wedding guest. Now that we've saved you any fuss, we can't wait for you to celebrate with us."
Is this inappropriate to put on an invite or should we just leave it blank.
Thanks
**EDIT: We are not doing a wedding website as many of our families are not technologic savvy enough to navigate to one.