I have done a few mock ups of diy invitation wordings and am wondering which flows the best, I will include the info minus our names and venue. 1st example:
WE JOYFULLY INVITE YOU TO OUR
WEDDING CELEBRATION
ON THIS DAY WE WILL MARRY THE ONE
WE LAUGH WITH, LIVE FOR, DREAM WITH, LOVE
PLEASE JOIN
&
Sunday, the tenth of October two thousand ten at two O’clock in the afternoon
CAKE RECEPTION IMMEDIATELY FOLLOWING
VENUE INFORMATION, DIRECTIONS AND MORE CAN BE FOUND ON OUR WEDDING WEBSITE: