Feedback on Wedding Invitation and rsvp Card?

I would put the guests attending line underneath the "I can't wait to show off my moves."

If there are any out of town guests is there a specific hotel people are booking rooms at is the only thing i would say

I might say "We invite you to share our joy at the wedding of" or "we invite you to share our joy in the union/marriage of"

I think its really nice though and I only said that after really combing over it.

If you have any guests who are likely to add on children or dates you have not invited, or bring along the mother in-law who lives with them, then this RSVP should be more specific and limited.
name you fill in before sending / will attend/ will not attend. So when Joe and Chris open their invitation in front of 2 kids and a relative not invited, it says: ________________________
M. Joe Fox will attend /will not pork/chickenM. Chris Fox will attend/will not pork/chicken1 or 2 will attend ******************************So there is no place to add extra names. You write in names, in addition to addressing the envelope(s) , so it is clear, these people, no others. If you have printed 4 lines and are inviting 2 people, write in 2 and put a line through the extra spaces.You may put in the cute phrasing, instead of will attend/ will not, but if the max number is 1 or 2 or 3, don't leave an open blank line for names, or numbers, or you will get a 6, with 6 names on the lines. Joe, Chris, Marvin,Kate will attend 4 porkMary, Kevin, will attend 2 chicken #6. And a note that says: My sister's family will be visiting that week. You all know Kate! If you are one of the lucky, no one you know will do that. But after their wedding, most brides will say, make it really hard to write in any names, or any number higher than you want. The time spent writing names of those you invite, filling the line, and. # 0 or 1 or 2, if you ask for a count, is worth it.

I would swap the placement of the year and the time. It seems like having the year on the same line as the other date elements makes more sense.

I think you could go without zip code so that line isn’t so long. Usually zip code is only for mailing/addressing envelopes.

Is it possible to add a vegetarian / vegan option (disregard if none of your guests apply to this category).

I would swap the "2020" and the "5:30" that way the date is all in line. Otherwise I think they're super cute!!

I mean this in the friendliest way, you should delete this and repost with the details blacked out. This site seems safe but you never know, I wouldn't put all that information on the internet to strangers. As for the rsvp, I feel like to some older generations may not get that those are the "yes, attending" and "no, not attending" options.

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I feel this haha

First, I would black out all of the details of the wedding except the date and time. This forum is public to anyone who types in wedding invitation, rsvp cards, or etc in a google search. I would swap year and time.

And although I like your creativity with accepting and declining, I would say, "yes, I cant wait to... and no, you'll have to .... You also need space to write two or three names.

But they are really cute and simple!