Dual Language Invitations ---Is this good?

Are you including your names?

Yes I am, sorry when I included the picture I hadn't added them yet. It'll be like this

For the caterer, do you need an idea of entree requests?

I find the wording in the first and second paragraphs a bit clunky. Why don't you simply use the wording from the sample and change a word here or there? You also don't need to say "ceremony to take place.....".

@BeachDreams no, we won't. But I was thinking that maybe I should add "____children plates requested"

Usually invitations don't say "ceremony to take place at" or anything like that -- just list the date and the location. Also, traditionally, invites are worded in the third-person. So:

"Claudia ___ & Wilmer ___

Together with their families

request the honor of your presence

at the celebration of their marriage (or "at their wedding")

Sunday, the eighteenth of December

two thousand sixteen

at four o'clock in the afternoon

The Chapel at Briscoe Manor

city, state

Dinner and reception to follow."

I think this is a brilliant idea! I don't know any Spanish, so can't help you there, but the English is worded kind of awkwardly. I would change it to:

"Your Names

and our families are honored to invite you to

the celebration of our marriage."

And in the RSVPs, I don't think you need the middle line for number attending. Since you have blanks next to attending and declines, it gets repetitive.

I'm not good with wording but I love this idea!! I wish I had thought of it as I'm Hispanic and FH is not. I only included Spanish on our STD card but it's subtle and only on the back part.

Just wanted to say that I LOVE the idea of dual language invitations!

ETA: FSIL and her husband said their vows in both Spanish and English, but they would have loved this idea!

Bookcase has it! the "we may have the honor to invite" doesn't sound right at all. You don't need the honor to invite, you are requesting the honor of their attendance.

Otherwise, it's a beautiful thing! What a great idea.

The Spanish looks great. I just agree with PPs on switch out the second paragraph with just saying where and when, not like a full paragraph!

@Marsha thank you I will make that change on the RSVP for sure, I also thought it was a bit repetitive but was using an example from the people making our invites.

@BookCaseHat thanks so much, I like the way that flows a lot more.

Again, used samples given to me and just worked with what could be translated best.