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Devoted July 2017

Extra sets of eyes needed - Wedding Invitations

Masada, on March 27, 2017 at 9:58 PM Posted in Etiquette and Advice 0 8

Hey everyone, I'm in the final stages of wedding invitation design but I could use some help on making sure I have the correct grammar and phrasing for my invitations. I'm still working on spacing but any advice you have would be great. TIA!


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Latest activity by MNBride, on March 28, 2017 at 2:48 AM
  • Susan
    VIP December 2017
    Susan ·
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    The only thing I see is the twenty-second should have a hyphen. Otherwise they look really nice!

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  • L
    Super July 2018
    LibbyLane ·
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    Everything looks right in regards to phrasing. The word choice seems very formal for the design, IMO.

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  • EngineerInLove
    VIP September 2018
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    Agree with Susan on the hyphen but that's a small tweak

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  • Madelayna
    VIP September 2017
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    I love it <3 looks great to me!

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  • NextMrsD
    Super November 2016
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    I would add o'clock after five and there is no and in the year. Is there a picture on the right side or is everything aligned left for a reason? Is there supposed to be a period after St?

    The only other thing I find a little distracting is the different fonts. I think the suggested number to use is two and it looks like you may have four?

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  • T
    Dedicated November 2017
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    How formal is your wedding? If it's formal, I suggest capitalize the first letter of the year. I love your color choice but I think it's a little too busy with the different fonts.

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  • StPaulGal
    Master July 2017
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    Previous posters have it covered, but I just had to chime in to say that we are date twins and you are getting married a couple of miles from my house!

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  • MNBride
    Master June 2017
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    Just popped in to say I LOVE that venue! It's right be our old condo. And the food there is amazing. I really wanted to have our reception there it just didn't work for our guest count. Can't wait to see your BAM!

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